wow- creepy.
I love it. :D
Nothing better than psycopathic kids.
Did you find it at all difficult to write? My mates challenged me to do somehting containing like, every damn taboo they could think of. Rape, murder, torture, **, incest, canibalism...I kinda felt sick writing it.
I really like the imagrey in this. The whole 'coonskin' thing, an that the kid is so paranoid he doesn't realise Alan is tyring to be his friend. It makes me want to know more. Like...the whole hunting thing. I get the feeling theres a background story to this that made Caleb the way he is.
Did you know Caleb directly means dog? Or, loyal as a dog. I love the name, and it's really fitting for this character.
Well done on this. I love gore stories, and this filled my morbidity quota for the day.

Lovelove.

Erasmuss.

Well...that was intense. Not quite sure how i feel about it just yet, but to be honest it was well written for what it was. It's what runs through all of us taken to that next level, so all in all well written tid-bit.