Aww, I wish I'd found this sooner. I think you should write more. A lot more!:D

Hmm...This looks promising. But wow, lots of things to explain later that will make the story interesting, giving it some depth.

Well, good luck I say!

I look forward to another chapter.

That was sad though I thought it was funny that you used the sort of baseline Visa or Mastercard (Sorry I can't remember.) uses to sell their credit cards.

BP-BW

That beginning, I have to say. Was absolutely awesome. Interesting funeral seen, I must say. I'm really interested to see where this one is going.

And hopefully I'll also find time to finish "Said the Spider to the Fly." _

But I'll be following this for sure.

-Mekena VerSluis