|Reviews for did you know redemption could taste so bitter?|
| diffident 4/12/09 . chapter 1
I'm not usually one for formatting but in this piece, your use of it was really effective and didn't detract from it at all. I love the message and you portrayed it very well, but I feel like the second stanza is kind of weak. Other than that, excellent poem.
| kloun mannequin 4/12/09 . chapter 1
we long for the highest regards
and can't find the time of day
to give our solace to others.
I like that part.