"Remember" :) It's so sweet and sad and beautiful :) Amazing job! I can see it like I'm watching scenes out of a movie rather than reading words off a page. Keep up the wonderful writing!! :)

Aww...this could almost make me cry. Anyway, this has a feel to it that makes it seem like it almost doesn't belong in modern times, an excellent old-time atmosphere or something. It's short and sweet and meaningful too.

I like the tone of these poems of yours, they remind me of some kind of old poems, though I can't make out which exactly..
A very fluent and sweet piece, you are really talented ^^

M... I am attracted... need to do one with angst now seeing you call him 'war hard'! ;)

How do you be so GOOD at writing and yet never have mentioned this fact?
Hm...

I hope you have more of these swimming around in that head of yours?

xx