 Unknown Error 4.0 2009-04-12 . chapter 1Wow. Amazing poem. Why is there only one (well, after this, two) review on this awesome poem?!
I especially loved the last verse. "If I'm the lover...Baby, you're loved". Awesome way of wording it.
Thanks,
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 The Postscript 2009-04-12 . chapter 1Oh, I could feel that this would be a wonderful poem in just reading the summary! Absolutely stunning work. I love how much vivid imagery and sheer class this poem has! It's simple, light, and really just jumps off the page. Wonderful work. Keep writing, k. |