I really really enjoy your stories, I find that when I start them, everything of importance gets disregarded because I just can't stop reading! I've read your prophecy of nature series and this one and I can't wait for you to post the next book in the series, thanks so much for writing so well, I really appreciate your talent!

:D thanks for the awesome story! i LOVED it! it was so cute. :3 :D :3 :D

so the Third and final Trial is to defeat the King of Kittyana... but isn't Regan the King? so he has to kill Regan? or his successor Lyskander?? i'm a bit confused... :P

This was an amazing read, I love the character dynamics and the world you created.

This was the first and only story I have read from you, proving that you can indeed read your books as stand-alone's.

The first chapter had some lengthy paragraphs with just descriptions that was slightly confusing. I much preferred when you told the past or an explanations spread throughout the book.

Brilliant, simply brilliant writing. I fell in love with your characters and their strengths and flaws.

PLEASE PLEASE continue writing, get your books published! Fantasy writers such as JK Rowling and Jim Butcher had to once be in your position!

I didn't come across one spelling mistake or error, so you've done amazing editing as well.

Thank you for a wonderful read (though I stayed up until 4am and now my sleep schedule is out of wack).

Azer

*SIGH* I read Meena's story this morning- lol, I seriously am taking this lazing about thing to the next level. Anywho, I am happy your 'creative streak' has lasted thus far it is truly a wondrous thing. :) Thanks again!

I can't wait for you to write the final book!
And you should REALLY REALLY REALLY get your books published. Just send it out there, cause they're definitely better than many books I've read.

I REALLY want to hear the story of how Iain and his wife fell in love.

I actually did not guess, but it does make sense.

Hey,

Have you ever thought of maby doing a Ruy/Prophetess story? I personally have been waiting for the anouncement at the end saying it would be next. It seemed that you were hinting at it the last few chapters

Cheerio,
FIR3 AND ICE

get it published.
seriously.

I know you're terrified and it's rather likely that no one will actually be able to convince you until you've sorted out what it really is that's stopping you and decided to go for it but . . . just do it.
It's a good thing because I've heard and it's logical that publishing is the type of field where you get thousands of rejections and if you're trying because of what someone else said that's rather likely to make you give up.

And you can trust me because, let's face it, it's far nicer for me if your writing is free and on the internet so I'm actually going against my ulterior motives.

Sequels in fantasy are always rather a hard sell since a part of what is so attractive is the novelty, but I wouldn't even think about that (obviously) until after the first one.

Look it's just good, yes there are ridiculuously perfect happily ever afters but there is definitely a market for that. People like fantasy because they can explore a new world, or escape they're own and it's the characters that sell it, that have to be compelling and not too otherworldly. You've essentially combined a romance with a fantasy plot, people like both and like them together, although I've no doubt you'll get remarks about it being too idealistic and unrealistic (the more cynical part of me thinks this is probably since it is then harder for people to believe, or fantasize, that this will happen to them). Also everyone is exactly what they seem - there's no real betrayal, or the hero being proved wrong about someone, or the idea that you just don't get along with some people, in fact you hate them, but that doesn't mean that they're evil, so I'm sure you'll get feedback that it's too simplistic. But they're absolutely charming and what we all wish that we could wish for but are far too cynical to actually do so.

They're just good and should reach further than the internet community and you should get something finite and physical (i.e. actually seing your book in the flesh as it were, not the money) from the devotion you have given it - the character studies, the history, developing traits and background.

. . . . and I can't state this enough but things are either good or not and this is just good

(sorry if it's a bit jumbled, I have a tendancy to babble anyway and am currently rather sleep deprived - moral of the story jump, take a chance and try to get it published. Yes it will hurt (badly!) if they rip it to shreds but that is life; you have to risk it and sometimes you lose, you deal with it and get on with it) .uk

I think that this is one of your best books ever in terms of writing skill. Im amazed at the complexity of the plot and all the politics and dealings to do with the director and Ruy. I never realised that Mae was Sei and Ruy was Ari although i had suspected that Lyskander was Regans son. Seriously though, i was so impressed with this one, i found all the plots to do with the director so interesting and i was kept guessing the whole way through. One of my top three favourites of yours. And i cant wait to read Ruys story because i need for him to have a happy ending, hes been through too much!

this was a great book. I cannot wait to read about Ruy as I find him a more interesting charector than the others. He is gonna fall for the prophetess! right! yeah I know so. Anyways I can't wait to read!

Interesting..im want to know what breaking a slave entails, i thought just rape alone would be enough! Im sure Mae going to be quite different from all your other characters then, including the other ones that have been abused, poor thing. The very begginning did confuse me a little bit though, she kept mentioning her brother, so i assumed she was talking fromt the present, not the past.

I know that your afraid of trying to get your books published, but you should try. Your books are amazing. And i would love to have hard copies of them sitting on my bookshelf. I will hunt you down if you still haven't published them by the time i become an editor. I. Will. Hunt. You. Down. Please write more soon! :)

oh! YAY!

Ruy and Aiya? Maybe? YAY! That will be wonderful!

Loved the ending of this one. Fantastic. I' gonna have a huge grin on my face for the rest of the day now :)

Thank you thank you!