 TheBeautyOfTheGrave 2009-04-13 . chapter 1This is very sweet, I like the idea and the repitition of the "I didn't think much of it" gives the poem a good rhythm creates a sense of confusion almost.
Just one mistake though - in the 7th stanza, you said 'and' instead of 'at' - "She winked and me and..."
Good poem ^^
~Holli ♥♥ |