I am not too sure if I understood this poem, but the imagery was very strong. Good work!

Oh, wow, that it so very sad!

"What’s to see?

A black soul

Against black walls"

Thats so depressing! And sometimes I feel like this. A beautiful piece. So relatable!

this one is really unique, i like it allot!

But the main reason

To why I painted my soul black- i can relate to that line the whole poem was great

Definitely different, but I like it:)

Write on!

As most of your work, this was amazing!

For some reason right now I'm relating to a lot of you're work.

Here are a couple of my favorite lines ( I said a couple because I adored the entire poem! )

"Because that black room keeps me away from it all

Away from everything

Everything that could hurt me

Everything that has"

So true. . . I keep myself hidden covering up all the pain :(

"But the main reason

To why I painted my soul black

Was so you couldn’t see the truth"

And I'm trying to hide the truth :(

"What’s to see?

A black soul

Against black walls"

And that's the cover! u.u

Like I said before, this poem is amazing, alsoo going into my favorites! (:

Keep writing! (:

Looking forward to more pieces from you!

"This black room is me"

I loved that line, I know why you called it Black Room! And I also thought that line was a dividing line, like cutting it in half. The first part, each line started with "...Black room," and after "This black room is me" each line started differently! I really, really liked how you did that! Great work! D