Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: Midnight of the Dead Earth
moonlightwarrior859 2009-11-12 . chapter 2
Wonderful! Much less errors in this one that the first one, not that there were that many errors in the first one to begin with. The only thing that I caught was a missing letter from a word or two! I love it! Leaving it at that, I'd like to say that I'm excited for the next chapter!
moonlightwarrior859 2009-11-12 . chapter 1
Hello! Let me start off by saying I thoroughly enjoyed the chapter!

Lets cut right to the critisism, but there isn't alot, I asure you. You seem to have a bit of confusion when it comes to the whole 'its' versus 'it's' you may or may not know the difference, so at no offense to your knowledge of the English language, but its is the possesive form, and it's is a contraction of it and is. There were little or no grammatical issues, and on that note, I congratulate you, most authors have several issues with grammar. I did see some small typing errors, but I found that it was easy to read around them, however, you may want to go through with a fine tooth comb and correct the minor things, or, you could have a new set of eyes go through it ^-^ I find that it always helps to have somebody else look through it! You never know what you may have missed that someone else might find!

You did an amazing job with this fiction, and I hope to read your second chapter soon, that is if I find the time :) Also, on a departing note, It would be an honor if you were to read/review my story 'The Call of the Wolf' and you can find it on my profile, if you would like to read it :D
Darkshadow-lord 2009-05-19 . chapter 2
Interesting Story! I can't wait to read the rest of it!!
Omok 2009-04-21 . chapter 2
oh wow =O not a fluffy romance type of story. xD

Hehe. xD Cool enough. i rarely find any that aren't. =)

xD I anticipate the updates for this story. =D
Harry 2009-04-21 . chapter 2
Sounds like Catherine and this were cat might be either allies or possibly lovers before this tale is done!
breaktherules 2009-04-15 . chapter 1
Rachel is REALLY creepy. I like her ^_^

Looking forward to the next chapter.
Harry 2009-04-13 . chapter 1
Well, this is one female vampire who is old enough and powerful enough to handle things. Lets see what happens as she starts organinzing things.
Omok 2009-04-13 . chapter 1
hahaha...interesting. XD I'm waiting for MC2 to show up...xD Would it be the mayor? =O xDD Hahaha. XD I've always imagined (fiction ones at least) mayors to be over weight 60 year old dudes. LOLS. :D :D

this one; seems to be different. XD

but yeah :D :D update update~ :D :D can't wait!
Return to Top