Wonderful Skylar.

Just wonderful.

I KNEW IT! I KNEW that she was the one who died! -does a stupid victory dance-

Man, wasn't THAT morbid? I mean...-shivers-

The writing was really haunting, and you very cleverly dropped hints of her being the ghost, and not Kris and Josie. (And HELLO? Who saw the lesbian couple come into play? I wonder if that was before or after the girl's death.)

I loved how you had her oblivious to the fact that she was dead. Very interesting. And, of course, well written.

I like the kids in the library. "What page are you on?" OO, how haunting! I wonder what they are talking about...

Well, this was really good. I really liked it! This would've been interesting to continue, but I accept that you just made it a one-shot.

Sid

Wow that was some nightmare! It gave me chills lol. Amazing, as usual :)