This is simply is the best poem,I have ever read.I didn't find anything wrong with it at all. As I read this poem, it made me cry.I think you showed the horror, that Hitler brought, very is very touching poem,you described the horrors so well,that I felt like I was in a death camp, when I read this. You should have got an "A" on this.

Ugh, I'm so jealous of you and your poetry skill. I can't make a rhyme if my life depended on it, and if I do, it sounds like it came out of a really bad nursery book.

Anyway, good job on your poem. I like how your message is conveyed crystal clear instead of hidden in a billion metaphors. I know I'm the first person to review this (whoo!), but let's hope the crowd's interest is piqued and my review will be followed by tons more.

Evvy