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Reviews For: The Adventure
Insomniac37 2009-04-14 . chapter 1
Your descriptions are incredible. A popcorn shrine- I'm still smiling at that one.

Way to take something ordinary and make it an interesting read.

Well done.

-Insom
Terryll Preston 2009-04-14 . chapter 1
Nicely written, Danna. You captured the feelings and emotions that some people experience 'going to the movies' quite well. I can honestly say that I've had similar feelings of adventure myself...especially when it's a movie I've really been waiting to see. All in all, this was a very well-handled piece that does a great job at showing the writing talent that you possess. I can't wait to see more from you!

Thanks for the read and see you next review!

Terryll Preston, the former still2twisted...
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