I love the rhythm of this poem and way you move from one stanza too the next. And the ending wrapped up the poem perfectly. :)Brilliant as always

"I could hear it screaming." Brilliant. Haunting.

"Leaky pipes corroding in my eyes." VERY CREATIVE!

"Grocery store coffe like road tar brewing." Nice simile!

"Where we buried an unborn." Oh God! What a striking line! The tone is so painful. Ah...it's amazing... :)

"Cracked faucet takes me home." FANTASTIC ENDING!

Wow. You never cease to amaze me. :D

-Isca