This is soo beautiful. Love the flow and the feeling it gives off. Relaxing, yet sort of sad. I really like it! :D And very neat that you wrote it for Miyavi. :)

rolliepollie44

Haha, the funny thing is as I was reading this I was thinking "This sounds like the lyrics to a song Miyavi would write," and then I got to the author's note and found out it was for him.
I guess the word Melody in this has a special meaning if it's for Miyavi ;-)
It's got such a sweet feeling to it, I guess that's why I thought of Miyavi's lyrics. This is really nice.

"You aren't there anymore,
I'm not there anymore,
it's still a "home", right?
Not a home sweet home
though every corner is dark
and carries a memory."

I really thought this part was good! I also liked the way you capitalized "Melody" and "Future"!

~Hollis~

"It's still a home, right?" So sad!

Na dann wissen wir doch endlich wer deine Lieder endlich vertont, kann ich mir wieder gut gesungen vorstellen, vor allem die Sache mit dem "home", das nicht mehr sweet ist, aber trotzdem "home"