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Reviews For: What Makes Me Scared?
RazorStar 2009-04-17 . chapter 1
I liked the way you arranged your stanzas, and then you changed it up at the end to add drama to your poem. It's always hard for me to criticize poetry because it is so free form, but the ending line may need a bit of work. It's hard to explain but a bit of variation at that last line would have really made this stick out.
AliceAnimeLover 2009-04-15 . chapter 1
Nice one
As I read it, he/she was scared of falling in love
but he was scared that they will separate soon~
Nice one
(^_^)
lael1bologna 2009-04-15 . chapter 1
wow. This is a really good poem!
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