Review Marathon (link in my profile)

"You cried for anything,"... I think you really meant "You cried about everything"

The piece is interesting. I like the idea of tears drowning you into something good. Normally tears drown you into something bad. Nicely done.

Not sure I get the title though. Who's rip?

Very sad but lovely.

"And you'll see the angels fall in love with you again." Stunning! :D

Live is like this. We are always crying. Whenwe don’t have problems we cry for anything.
Good poem!