If I had a bit of criticism for this one it would be about comparing clouds to cotton. I don't know... cotton makes me think of cotton balls and I REALLY don't like the feeling of rubbing them between your fingers and *shudder* yeah. Overall, this was a really cute poem. Nice job.

i love this poem, i can relate to it a lot. thank you for posting it. wonderful, excellent, brilliant job.

it's a lovely poem full of love.

The 3rd stanza is my favourite. It's nice.
xx