Quite an emotional piece of writing!

I liked the descriptive phrases used to tell of the character's emotions and reactions. The repetition also made a good point for the poem.

I did dislike a little bit that it was vague in what the sad feelings were about, but it became more understandable after later readings.

I really liked it.

Yay~ (*_*) *sparkling eyes* LOL
very nice poem...
As I read the poem, I've been trying to know what the character will try...
So, she will try to love him more, right? hehehe
I'm not sure about this correction
"The gloomy room where are at now,"
shouldn't it be "The gloomy room where we are now,"
But, not sure...

But, nice poem... I could imagine the event... Poor girl~