I should have reviewed this a while ago, and for that I apologize, but I just have to say I LOVE this story so much and I'm definitely looking forward to the sequel and how you left just enough loose ends to make one.

Things I definitely want to see in the sequel are karma work its magic on Bryan and Tyler, Crow finding out about Bryan's duplicity, Mina's meeting with Danny, the rest of Nicolle's work place's reaction to Danny and Nick as a couple, and closure involving Nick's mom. I know you have a lot on your plate atm though, so I'm willing to wait ^_^

wow! good story! i wanted Dane to kick Tyler's ass so bad! i hope to one day be able to read a sequel to this story =)

This story was really sweet. :D

Thank you for writing this!

kyahh... ur awesome, dude! i read your kim possible fanfics, read your mai hime fanfics.. and your original fanfic is just as cool! your characters actually have character and the interactions, dialog and plot are wonderfully written! eagerly looking forward to more works from you!

Ey! I'm late...

Finally all ends right, uff what a relief... XD But I hope you do a sequel, I like very much the characters and I think there's still a lot more about them from you to tell us.

I follow your writings since you started with "Dents in her armor", and I know it's different to write a fanfiction than a original work, but I'm happy that you can success in both of them.

Congratulations from Spain!

Starving,

Excellent sory!

As much as I really don't want to, I really like Raymond, and you did a really good job with weighing fatherly over-protectivness, and nice guy.

Kate on the other hand... hm, she seems very over the top. She is overtly hostile without trying to "get" Danny. I cannot help wondering if there is a deeper meaning behind that...

The main characters are a lot of fun to read, and i enjoy their foils.

Good Work! Can't wait to read the sequal!

Your Humble Reader,
PG

This story was just like... WOW! I can't even think of how to say it in words, I guess perfect would be the best to summarize it. I wish most writers could write like you. It was simply beautifully written. The story might want to make you to jump for joy or cry your eyes out.

Good Job, I hope you write many more stories.

Hey, I really enjoyed this story. I liked how you gave a simple yet effective ending by making them leave Nick's office together, and starting a new "beginning" at the end of the story (reference to the chapter name). I especially love Nick because she sorta has my personality and people ironically call me Nick too lol (and yes i am a female). Um I also love Dane cause thats the type of person I would think Id fall for, minus the always wearing b-ball shorts. But I love everything else about her. Unfortunately, I didnt review as often as I would have liked, this stupid rewiew button doesnt always work for me. But I enjoyed this story a lot and looking forward to a sequel sometime in the future. \m/

Ahh, what a sweet ending. I hope there will be a sequel, these two are so cute :)

I love the idea of a sequal.
Now..onto the next story.

yeah! u did it! u finished ur first original work!


now for the commentary ^_^

1. yay! danny is getty help for her knee and hand!
2. double yay! nicole is taking classes!
3. hehe, the dads not bad at all, though the mom is still a peice of work

wow, good ending. i really liked this story, it may be one of my favorites since its original and very good.

things i want to see in a sequel...
1. dane gain full use of her hand
2. nicole quit law
3. tyler get fired
4. bryan get pwned in some way
5. nicole's mom get over herself

hope a new story starts soon!

-sigh- what a beautiful story! StarvingLunatic sama I love your writing and I look forward to reading a sequel if/when you decide to write it.

If you choose to publish this story I WILL buy it.

Love the ending. I really do. I'm so glad that things worked out as they did and I'm definitely looking forward to the sequel... ^_^ Thanks for writing!

TK

Woot, they are back together again. This chapter is good :)

hehe, ive been looking forward to this for the whole week.

1. im glad everything is being resolved
2. i hope we get to hear tyler getting fired
3. pls let us hear the rest of the dinner, i want to see danny deal with the inquisition!

and can u pls pls pls release the next chapter earlier since its the last one?