Beautifully written SL. Playful and serious all in one. It's not often that I come across something that is so utterly and simply amazing in a number of different ways. Thank you for telling me about your original works. I can't wait to read more.

i truly felt like i was involved in dane's and nicole's life. i worried when they both were going through rough patches, and grinned like a maniac when they were so blissful tgr. i dont normally feel like that, reading other fics, but yours... great characterization, awesome writing. one brilliant writer indeed. :D

My bad, I just noticed that the "complete" is on the left, I guess I'm too used to the other website.

Wonderful story!

I should have read it a long time ago but I wasn't sure it was completed, I strongly suggest you that you put the mention "completed" to the story.

Back to the story, I have to tell that I enjoyed very much every bit of it, I specially liked the humor you put along with the drama, you really did a great job. The main characters were believable and lovable.

I adore your shiznat fanfic and I for sure appreciate as much or more this original story.

I have one small regret, I was looking forward to the meeting with Nick's friends, I hope we will see it eventually.

Thank you very much for the story.

I'm looking forward to read the sequel.

I really love this story. You're always doing a wonderful job!

This is truly a remarkable story. I was riveted to my seat.

Well worth your time to read. I loved the characters and how

each of their personalities were revealed. I definitely

look forward towards the sequel.

Great story. You have a good writing style and also handle your characters well. Keep up the good work.

Great story, very much loved it. Wishing you do a sequel for Danny and Nicole!

Great work. Love the story. Especially since I can relate a bit to Nick.

Great work.

Being half-Puerto Rican

Yay! Puerto Rico.

am Puerto Rican am when sobebody mention P.R. in a story I get really happy.

Great work.

Aw, I love your story :)

Nick is such a good soul...

I dont want to say anymore, but hopefully there will be the sequel soon :)

bye

Yeah... I think Nikki *might* be a bit too much of a doormat, SL. If I came home to my house basically invaded and destroyed, my personal belonging and treasures trashed or riffled through -if not stolen or broken- I'd lose my sh*t. Period. And then I'd want serious revenge.

That kind of invasion of privacy, of home, is like an invasion of your person, not unlike being robbed or raped.

Dane has every reason to fear; she f'ed it up bad. And nice girl or not, If I were Nikki, I'd be showing her out the door as I called the police to file a police report, and have my locks changed.

Just my two cents.

Um, I guess my FF account isn't valid here? Odd.

You go Nikki! (A much sexier name, yes, than Nicole?) I'd have smote Tyler like a vengeful goddess, of the kid who still demanded human (Male) sacrifice, yuh dig? LOL! What a D-Bag.

Dane... know what's her deal I wonder?

And since when could you draw, girl? I didn't know that.

I should have reviewed this a while ago, and for that I apologize, but I just have to say I LOVE this story so much and I'm definitely looking forward to the sequel and how you left just enough loose ends to make one.

Things I definitely want to see in the sequel are karma work its magic on Bryan and Tyler, Crow finding out about Bryan's duplicity, Mina's meeting with Danny, the rest of Nicolle's work place's reaction to Danny and Nick as a couple, and closure involving Nick's mom. I know you have a lot on your plate atm though, so I'm willing to wait _