ever so interesting...

I might get to like Tyler, genius of the obvious

nice, now we get to see more about Dane. when you intruduced Crow I thought all of Danny's friends would be named after animals and then came Bryan.

really want to know more about him, just for curiosity's sake

Damn you woman why are you so good at getting my attention!

At any rate I find myself in love with Dane and Nick! lol

I really want to see how Dane gets Nick out of her snarky shark panties!

i feel like hating Tyler!

things seem to be going so well, and after that last juicy tidbit it just seems plain wrong!

as always, nice characters, good way of placing the base of the story; i have a feeling that we'll (the readers) learn soon about the plot.

amazing, please keep it up

hehe, the name game was cute

im praying that nicole finds some way to cure dane's hand.

what i meant by role reversal earlier is that in nicole seems a lot like kim and dane seems a lot like shego. in most, if not all of ur stories, kim is submissive, careing, and lets shego do things for her, while shego is grouchy, antisocial and the primary care giver. in this story the grouchy, antisocial character is letting the caring girl be the primary care give/

heavens know how good this story is.

this was wonderful, loving the theme.

cannot wait for the next chapter, thanks for such a great story up to now; this is simply looking majestic!

Niice new story, very intriguing! I look forward to seeing...reading how you unravel the mystery of Dane and her relationship w/ Nicole. Dane sounds like the type of person I would hang with, update as soon as you can! )

hehe, nicole seems a tad flustered.

i think this is an interesting story, since the roles seem to be slightly reversed from what u normally do.

hehe, danny is so cute!

go nicole!

nice chapter. i wish it was longer, not looking forward to the fight, but i want more!

Im getting more and more curious about Dane, keep up the good work.

And thx for the update!

awesome work.

i like the characters, specially how you convey their personalities through each other.

i sure hope that Nikki takes care of Danielle's limp.

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no wonder why i thought Dane was a strange name for a woman; i do like the story behind that one, and the fact that the emerald-eyed woman could guess quite closely this fact does say a lot about how they get along.

loving this, can't wait for the next chapter.

hehe, more banging on Tyler. i assume that Nicole is the black sheep of the family, and therefore the only polite one? *edit-then u go and use the same phrase, haha*

dang it! why cant i meet people like this, they sound so much fun XP

the age argument was cute

hehe, i love this story! i would suggest focusing solely on it, but then id never get updates on In the Middle and Joss's story

write more soon!

Nice to see their interaction and im a bit curious about dane's past and how she got into her "situation"

thx for the chapter and keep up the good work!

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Got me hooked, please contine

nice story, looking good.

wishing for the next chapter already and will wait patiently for it.

the characters are interesting; I'll wait another chapter or two to give you my thoughts on them, since right now I don't know them but they look well-rounded.

Dane the Great Dane, clever!

hmm, i would think homeless if i saw her

what a tool, tyler is a loser. no curtesy, no kindness, no respect. why the hell would anyone be with such a bastard? glad she dumped him

wow, i really liked this story! i was wondering whether i would since it isnt kigo, but i actually think its very good! i cant wait for an update! u should hurry up and get published so i can buy ur work instead of reading it online

It seems very promising and that tyler is such an a-ss!

well i cant wait to see what u have in store for us in this story.

until next update..