I rteally have no idea what to say. You're, like, really good author! Just update sooner, I really loved this story!:D

XD. I looks like I got all excited for good reason! King Arthur slash. Who knew?

Can't say I know much about the actual legend though. I just watched the Disney movie of it when I was a kid... which I doubt sticks all that true to the legend. >.> All I really remember of it is the scene where the kid pulls the sword out of the stone.
But the first actual King Arthur based book I read was in fifth grade and it was the first book that I ever read that could be rated M and it wasn't that good so it kind of killed King Arthur for me. I'm glad you brought me back though. ^_^ Nothing like some good boy slash to revive my interest.

Anyway. I totally loved the story. I'm a little peeved at you for not recommending yourself sooner. I guess I can't be too mad though I should have just known by looking at the reviews. 37 reviews for 4 chapters. That's almost ten a chapter. Your a review pimp!

And your writing is amazing. I never thought I'd be ever think 'aw poor guy' to someone who just murdered hundreds of babies, but I totally did. And Mordred is cute in his own scrawny self righteous way. It makes me really anxious to see what personality you paired him with. Hopefully he'll come in soon?

Wow. Kay. I rant too much. Manly I just wanted to say I love the story. Update soon. The mysteriousness of 'the wizard's apprentice' is killing me.

lol. bigger and better things? XD *giggle* yay immaturity... it was a sad bit, i teared up a little. No offense but i want Terrwyn to die. :P (nothing against him, not that i don't like him, i just want him to die. lol. am i making sense?)

It made me so sad that Mordred had to leave his home and Terry. The scene with his mother was heart wrenching. Can't wait for more! :)

You dedicated the chapter to me...little old me ( well you and I know I'm not that little... )
I feel so loved and well honored. My dearest friend I for one have been waiting over two months...well I think it's two months
for this update. By the way I'm not forgetting all the times I told your lazyass to start the damn chapter. I can't believe you didn't allow Mordred to stay with his first crush, what's wrong with you?! You better make up for it, or I swear I will find you and ...and take all your books. Seriously...

Oh well see I replied for once just for you...

With Love

Estefany

P.S.

Try to update earlier next time

Ah this came a little late, for some reason last night this feedback thingy was NOT WORKING!

This was really sad. ;_; I can't imagine sacrificing my own child, raising another's and then having to let that one go. Sucks. But then again royalty never did raise their own children, or plantation owners. O_o

The kiss was very cute and sad, but I'm glad you assured us that there are plenty more fish in the sea for Mordred. Guarantees alluring thoughts *thinks alluring thoughts*

I'm so glad to see your writing again. I really do enjoy reading it. ^^

AH, I love it! I'm glad I've found someone who likes Mordred as well. Yay! This story is especially interesting, and I've liked what you've written so far. It's very well developped, the characters keep me on my toes. Please write more, Ican't wait for the next chapter! 8D

It's sad and happy both - I'm sorry I don't get to read as often as I'd like. I always bookmark the updates though for when I find the time.

Yes an update! I was hoping and waiting that you would update this. The guy kissing guy scenes did not freak or gross me out. I wnoyed the scene between Mordred and Madra. Very sweet and eager to see where th rest of this story goes. Good to have you back.

Awesome :D

Oh no! Don't die! I really liked this chapter. You've got a very nice writing style. It's descriptive without being too long winded. You get the character's emotion across very well, and Mordred's crush on Terrwyn is so cute! Nice work!




~Reigh~ (With love from the Roadhouse)

Hm...I don't know if I like Merlin. I feel like there was a better solution to Arthur's problem that didn't include killing all those kids, and Merlin just ignored it and did what he wanted. Story is very interesting so far! On to the next chapter!



~Reigh~ (With love from the Roadhouse)

This is an interesting twist on the story of Arthur, so I will continue to read this. I like this, continue to write!

I had no idea! I didn't know this was going to be about Mordred! Man I love the Arthurian legend! This is going to be awesome! I was reading every word and it was like the first time I heard the beatles..
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"'You're just a peasant, nothing more, and I'm going to prove it to Gareth and mother!' The blue eyed boy shouted." In this context, "mother" should be capitalized because it is being used as a name. Also, "the" should not be capitalized because it is a fragment that describes how the dialogue should sound.

"He was fully armored, with a mighty broad sword at his hip..." Broadsword is one word rather than two.

"...his blue eyes wide with fright, and saluted at the two men." Take out "at."

"'B-brother, you see, I was defending mother's honor! These knaves stole into the yard to steal from us, from our mother!' The boy explained..." Once again with "mother." The first one should be capitalized because it is being used as a name, but the second one is fine. Also "the" in "The boy explained" should not be capitalized because it is simply describing how the dialogue is spoken and is a fragment. In the case here, and the one I previously commented on, the exclamation point acts in the same way that a comma would in dialogue; it doesn't require capitalization of the next part unless it is a separate sentence.

"...the fog shrouding mother's garden..." "Mother" again.

"...so I knew they wouldn't tell mother..." Mother.

Ok, the mother thing is getting repetitive. When it's used without a possessive, it is acting in place of a name and is a proper noun. With a possessive such as my or our, it is not a proper noun.

Told you I was nitpicky...

This was another fabulous chapter, especially with that ending. Um...where's the next chapter? The fight scene was well-written, and I love all of the brothers. The interaction between them is fabulous. Well, there are only so many praise words I can use in one review, so I'm going to stop there. This is awesome, though. I can't wait for more.