Powerful and Beautiful. One thing, third to last line of Part I: "but all you movements aren't listening." I'm guessing that the "you" is supposed to be your. other than that a good piece :)

"Bones so bright I want to play with them." Brilliant line. Good tone.

"Peace, I pray." Beautiful.

"And I can't puke out any more empathy." Striking! Angsty! :)