you are utterly brilliant. please please write more. :]

You are amazing!
I can't wait to read more. :)

This is wonderful! I was laughing throughout the story. You've really captured the Underworld and its inhabitants well. Thank you, and hope to read more :)

eek...i love this story. It's really creative and your characters are really well developed...and adorable. so yeah, thanks for sharing!

Oh, Maurice. *heart*

nice chapter. i really like how his first thoughts are "oh. oh damn." hehe it's so cute and Maurice. please update soon, it'll be interesting to see what his reaction is now that he knows.

I really like this story. It's unique.

yey! omg, i'm glad they finally got some action. poor oblivious maurice. at least he wasn't outright rejecting the attention, right? or maybe he's just in shock? oh well. keep writing. cheers. :D

Unexpected but certainly well recieved! :D I gotta say, after walking home in the puring rain after work, it was a nice suprise to see this updated so quickly. Good times ^_^ The Lovers sounded adorable. I love how everyone in the underworld has these bizzare titles. I'll stop here before i start squeeing :P Thank you for updating. :)

we're getting somewhere! yeah, finally^^ i'm so happy now. Maurice is really oblivious isn't he? it's kinda cute though. Liked how gilligan took advantage like that. it was funny. can't wait for the next chapter. update soon pretty please!

YES! Some action! Another lovely chapter. And this one was longer, too. Very nice. Keep it up, love!

Ash

(Sorry for the short review, but I'm really tired right now...=P)

“They bored me to death,”
“I doubt that. I haven’t moved an inch”
--it took me a while but that was pretty cute! :)

not completely unexpected, the ending. during the middle i guessed something like that...when they were talking about the Lovers and how they have to do something to keep the light on and such i was all,
"ooh! Gill and Maur will become the new Lovers (even tho now i know that it would be too much since they are death and deaths assistant--just wishful thinking) because they will kiss each other and people will notice that the lights were back!"

but i was only halfway right...but they kissed (again)! yay!

I dont quite Loke like i use to, but Gilligan is no doubt my fav-- is officially my favorite now :D

Ahh i can help but love Maurice's thick headed ways. Lovely update as always, thank you for posting. :)

I usually hate oblivious characters, but Maurice makes me melt into a puddle of fangirly goo. *heart*

aww.. maurice is so clueless that it's just adorable! but i do feel bad for gilligan.. =] hm.. i'd like to see what happens during maurice's date with artemis, but i'm going to guess you already have that planned for some time in the future.