"Which made me laugh and open the window." HAHAHAHA! Oh my goodness, I haven't laughed that hard in awhile. The comedic tone of 'open the window' is perfect. This line reminded me of the Shakespearean line, "And in some perfumes is there more delight / Than in the breath that from my mistress reeks." Lovely work.

"I had to tell you a couple of times that the gear stick is not where we hold hands." Oh, please, I can't handle anymore of these funny lines, they're too wonderful. :D

"I had to tell you a couple of times that the gear stick is not
where we hold hands, and that I’m an easily distracted driver."

"We learnt about limited time, about how the summer ends a little bit more,
every day, while we’re still struggling to remember how to get back home."

"while our shadows lengthened in the sun."

charming and quirky. purple patches: the shadows / the summer ending. perfetly balanced stabs of something more refined, emotional.

I really like this poem. [and you say you want to write like me? you have a gorgeous, individual poetic voice. I could easily say the same of you!]