Okay darling, I finally had the time to read this. And I really liked it. The atmosphere, the glimpses of the characters we get and everything... It's disjointed in a way but also tells a lot in few words. Lovely work!

(though I have to admit that the letters as names reminded me of Men in Black) 'T is an alien' as a plot twist anyone?))

> obnoxious, ambitious, intelligent in his own way,

Sounds suspiciously familiar... XDD

So that's that other original that you were writing? :) Good job, honey :)

Just left you a comment on LJ, but I think I'll repeat it here: awesome story, if only very weird) I fav'd it! XD