wow, great poem on a daring theme.

lovely allusion to hands, and clay. the poem is earthy and sincere; I think the spiritual is more effective in these simple, lovely terms.

thank you for the review.

this is beautiful:) I know the struggle is hard, but in the end don't give in, this touched me very deeply.

"An Honest Answer is like a Kiss on the lips." Proverbs 24:26.

Your poem, if not brutally, is honest darling. I think an important thing we often miss as a christian culture. Struggling to maintain abstinence IS a difficult battle. But, God has been most graceful to us and it's only fair that we as children are honest back. That is true for everything we ever struggle with though.

I love you. =)