Well, that was a good poem. Only thing is that I fail to spot the spiritual aspect here. Maybe you can enlighten me on this one. :) But I do like the way you used the different genres of music to your advantage here. It's like I'm seeing somebody having the experience of lyrics writing unique to his own via all that he has listened to. Also the impression of the writer being immerses in his own world was also quite well done via the usage of words. All in all a good piece of poetry. And sorry for not reviewing earlier since I only intend your payback reviews to be limited to The Eternal Grail. And yes, you've guessed it. New chapter of the story is up. Hope to see your review for it soon. :)

oh i love this poem! your imagery is amazing...unfortunantly, the clickity clack is conspicuously absent on my end...wonderful job!

This is excellent! I'm glad to see the speaker was such an inspiration. I love the breaks in this too--very musical. Excellent!

I like this a lot. It has a good flow to it, and you made it descriptive enough to pull your reader (i.e., me) in without being overly cryptic.

Fantastic job.