|Reviews for The Man with the Spider Badge|
| YasuRan 12/5/10 . chapter 5
As I was reading, I couldn't help but think of 'The Boy in the Striped Pyjamas'. The titles are quite similar and so is the content to a point. I really loved the tenderness of this piece, which is important considering the story is written from a child's POV. Your attention to details is also a nice touch: the spider badge for instance. Despite the language being quite simple, you managed to convey everything that could be gauged from the setting and what the characters had to portray. I ended up feeling for Helmet just as much as Enid does.
All in all, well done to you! Hope to see more, writing-wise :)
| Ambyy 10/7/10 . chapter 5
aw! This story was so cute! I loved it. I wish that it continued so I could find out what Enid thought about it when she grew up! And what happened to kind 'Helmet'.
| Maia England 2/23/10 . chapter 5
That's a sad ending! I hope he got out alive haha. This was a wonderful story :)
| VitamViva 1/30/10 . chapter 5
...This brought me to story deserves much more reviews. When Enid grows up, I hope she won't regret making such a forbidden friend. Great story!
| Written 11/23/09 . chapter 5
wow, you are totally brilliant. this story was so... sad? thrilling? i don't know, but just beautiful.
| limbolical 9/4/09 . chapter 5
I don't know why this story has never been reviewed. It is so beautiful and breathtaking. Thank you for such a lovely short story.