I really, really liked that. The rhyming scheme made it flow so well.

Well written, great style, interesting theme.

Good work.

TT_TT Sadness! This is a wonderful poem, but it is also highly depressing. It reminds me of my best friend.

whoa... enough said

I know I've told you already,this is a truly brilliant piece. It's powerful and lingers in the mind long after the reader has finished it.

Love alex x

the story is great. little voices in her head/tell her she'd be better dead. i can feel the sheer emotions of the poem.

ps please read and review my stories if possible

This is very good, very powerful. What song did you have in mind?

"She whispers to the evening stars." BEAUTIFUL!

"Somehow she just carries on." A true warrior.

"The lonely ones will alway disappear." I like that you ended on a sad note. :)