Fast paced which is good.
Mysterious which is good.
You've still got me hooked, which is great!
Can't wait for the next installment of "WHAT HISTORY HOMEWORK?" *dramatic musical interlude*
(sorry really random today, but really can't wait for more)

Interesting a few grammar mistakes but a very interesting start to a story a little confusing with the description of the characters tho. but good keep going. and to answer one of your questions i have the oh so fun feeling that the stranger the god is Anubis jackal headed god of mummification! helper or Isis.

Ahh...This is ironic. I've been studying Egyptian mythology a lot these days.
If I could meet some of the Gods Seth wouldn't be on my top 10 though...poor lad.
And poor Sabrina...what's the heart thing he's talking about?
Kind of reminds me of Kingdom Hearts for some reason...
ah..well enough of my pratting.
Update soon
ja

You absolutely must update this soon, I've been looking for a story like this, and finally I've found it.