oh please dont make us suffer anymore and update please! i really like this story...

I love your story!! wonderful writing style and I am totally in love with your characters. wish you could update a little sooner, but I understand how busy life can get sometimes. I will definitely be watching out for an update! I'm really really glad I found this story. Thanks!

Oh, and I was really surprised when Laura said "fudge" in that one chapter. I thought I was the only one who used that as a semi-curse word! :)

love this story please update

My god, I totally dig their interaction. >: Its kind of cute in a way.

Looking forward to your next update!

=O This chapter didn't seem like it was unbeta-ed XDD hehe. I didn't find/see any typos =o haha. it's fine as it is. =)

"All thanks to Hope." =/ I got a feeling Hope is someone, not the feeling...=/ I'll keep that in mind. xD hehe, hope you update soon and prove me right xDD hahaa XD

=3 =D and a weeks' holiday in nearing the end of the school year. ~_~; wow ~_~;

Christ, Rob's a damned asshat. ** me off pretty badly that he'd even think of attacking a girl, no matter what she did. Even I can't hit a girl, and I am one. But then...I am a bit of a chauvinist. Isn't that funny? Lesbian chauvinist.

Rayne's mother is a ** as well. She's just so...ugh, I kind of want to grab her by the hair and slap some freaking sense into her.

Well, as always, I eagerly await your updates.

Nice how you introduced the whole gay thing and I’m liking how Laura and Rayne are interacting. xD

This is one of the greatest stories I've read on here! Seriously! It's fantasticly well-written, totally unique plot, and has lots of surprises in it.

Definitely keep up the updating, and I'll keep up my reviewing!! :D

Interesting development. I thought you would continue with the whole "completely perfect & no issues" thing going on, then suddenly you pop out with this!

I loved this chapter!! The end kinda confused me about the.. tiger tattoo? I'm not sure what the Chinese symbol means.

Anyways, very long chapter (perfect!!) haha.

Kep up the updating, please! :)

Haha; I love how you call it her dirty little secret. =P

Well, I kind of think it's a befitting theme for her. No ones' flawless; so she shouldn't be neither. =P

It is kind of sad though; a Peek in to her life. =3 meh. I'm surprised the psychiatric center this IS run-down. 'cause gah; that would've been CLOSED down here in Canada. or at least FIXED xDD haha. (Though Carol do sound fine.)

Well...Hope you update soon; Of course; and as always; I'm waiting. =D

Haha Duke of Edinburgh, yeah I heard that was on - some people I know are doing it though I didn't really fancy it myself. Nice chapter and I see what you mean where all the changes got messed up; I was kinda wondering why there was a lot of stuff written twice :)

Okay, I'm going to be honest and say I was either too dull or too wrapped up in everything else to figure out that the whole partying/drugs/etc thing was a coverup for how bad Rayne really felt inside. I feel like a dipstick now.

*pouts* Laura had a very, very, small role in this chapter. *pouts*

and and, xD there's a number of errors, five if I recall correctly, in this chapter. I NORMALLY don't point them out, XD BUT, the funny thing is, three of the errors in this chapter was BOLDED xD so I thought that was amusing, so I thought I'd mention it.

As for the other two, one was a word that was typedlikethis (handtravel and...some other word that I'm too lazy to hunt for) and the other was eh..

"Lisa caught just as I" Lisa caught...what? O_O;

so yap! that's about it; XD don't worry; or worry? O_o; I normally don't point out errors; I don't see them as a big deal. LOLS XD *shrugs* :D

Thanks for writing and updating! I hope to see more xD (and there better be more!) XD Da story ish unfoldingg XD lalalala. xD

Ok ive reviewed 4 u so u must b nice 2 me 4ever and ever!

1. Spelling mistake 3rd para 'Furry'?
2. Whats with 'stripped' hair?? u mean striped
3. Far too much swearing. Any1 wud think u wrote this 2 please urself nt others.
4. Re think ur predicatbility. AS soon as u say the seating plans been changed we knw whats cuming. Likewise ive already guessed that Rayne and Laura will probs become and 'item' What happened to all tht mystery and suspense and u did so brilliantly in Assainated Heart hu??

U need to hook me in sumhow.
other wise it is boring Sorry but u wanted critical feedback n ur getting it and im feeling relly ill and cranky aswell.
Bx