I liked it, and I hope to read more.

"Theirs nothing positive"

I think that should be There is nothing positive. I think you only us their for a show of possession. "Like The ball was theirs."

"perhaps people will be more kind-hearted than the people in her new school."

I think you meant to put old school instead of new.

Odd last name. Like it, probably kind of foreshadows the whole elemental thing, right?

I'm ashamed of FP people sometimes, how they don't give new stories a chance, I hope you get new/more reviews.

Oh, by the way thanks for your enthusiastic review on my story, and favorites- it seems I don't get much of those.

Thanks again, and please update soon.