Damn it, I'm trying to stay away from these vampire stories. Curse you! However this is refreshing in that the vampire in female, and supa sexy. If I swung that way, rawr.

Also, I dunno if you're aware of this, but your story is all in bold text. Kind of scared me. Maybe you were going for that though?

Overall good read, keep it up. Looking forward to more.

Wonderful introduction!

I loved how you slowly described how he was seduced by her, and made it very believable - a very sexy vampire! Excellent!