I like these short drabble style chapters quite a bit. I always like knowing different people's point of view.

Hope to read more soon ^^

Hmm... this chapter cleaned things up a bit... they still don't know each other and I just feel like there should have been a bit more elaboration on how he felt (usually there would be awkward moments before the lovey moments...)

Overall it's a cute story though ^^ It's distracting me from studying... yikes.

Does Ryan even know Daniel before he slept with him? The first two chapters seem to indicate that Ryan doesn't really remember much of what happened when he was drunk, since he didn't even know who he slept with, and now all of a sudden they're chummy and behaving like they're shy in love ... I don't feel like there was adequate introduction between the two of them and not enough flow going from drunk night with a stranger to lovey dovey morning after...

I mean, Daniel is out of the blue asking him to redecorate his house and possibly even hinting at asking him to move in... and I don't even know if they have ever met before...

Aww, seeing it from Daniels perspective makes it all so sweet.

Okay the whole thing seems cuter now. Sorry for my previous review, I was confused a little because everything moved so quickly.

Oh my god, Ryan is so creepy. He's like that babysitter that the man falls in love with; they have looks, a way with kids and a sob story... then they take over your life and kill you when things don't go the way they wanted! He even has a history of mental illness! Lol Just kidding... kinda. It's a cool story. I will continure reading to see what happens and if my theory is true.

beautiful story
i quite loved it :D

My sister's room is LIME GREEN. I mean FLOURECSENT! If I canhandle that and not be sick in the morning... I think I can handle blacks, navys and darks.

LOL.

Pink and Ruffles... eek. I think when I was little I wanted Dinosaurs... then it was the ocean... my sister had Winnie the Pooh.

Oh Daniel.

Hey. So turns out you're only allowed to write one review per chapter or something but I needed to say it before I forget (because I will)
Make Ryan and Daniel get a puppy! I want them to. Haha :P But seriously. A little English Bulldog. Cute :] Think of it's pwetty face ;]
Fine...you don't have to. Author's rules and all...which I do respect. So...bye.
Oh! And I forgot to mention - it's fine about the sleepover thing haha. I love this story and it has no graphic sex or anything...maybe I'm growing up.
Interesting.
xD

Hey. I wanna know about this sleepover haha...just not the KID's POV. :] I have a dirty mind. I know. But yet again, really good chapter. Nice turning point for Daniel.

You spelled drabble wrong in the chapter name ^^;

"Tomorrow I will weld a brush against my demons." I'm assuming you don't mean metal working xD so "wield."

"like I am the very air he breaths" breathes.

Daniel's just one big ball of angst, isn't he? ;) But the last line of the last drabble just killed me.

The more I read of that story, the more I like it. Thanks for sharing these four&their story with us.

It was really cute, seeing the trip from all four points of view. I really like Kevin and Lys' point of view is funny.

I'm also looking forward to meeting Ryan's sisters. Maybe the switching views? I kind of want to see what's going on in both of their heads.

Hey. I really like this chapter, but I've liked all of them. But it was a nice change to read what the kids are thinking. For some reason I kept confusing Kevin with Ryan and thinking Ryan was Kevin this chapter. Can't wait for more. Seriously, without a doubt this is one of the really good stories I smile when I get those stupid alert things these guys send. Best award ever ;] No, you'll get better haha.