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The-Golden-Hour 2009-05-30 . chapter 1
m coffee :L,
Isca 2009-05-21 . chapter 1
The mug's purpose is to be used--perhaps this is a metaphor for life? I think it's interesting that 'a few drops' were still left at the bottom--suggesting that the speaker has unfinished dreams he hasn't attended to lately. Good haiku. :)
Faithless Juliet 2009-04-26 . chapter 1
I like that it's about both the coffee cup, and the coffee. As well as the relationship between the two. Keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.
no.peace.los.angeles 2009-04-25 . chapter 1
Very nice little snippet of a moment. I like it. Keep writing! :)
Moondog Dozier 2009-04-23 . chapter 1
Truth in visualization. For some reason I like how you've used the color blue to describe the coffee mug. It enhances the visual and hints at the mugs sadness for being nearly empty. MD:77.
boys kiss girls 2009-04-20 . chapter 1
I love the image of a light blue coffe mug. I'm not sure why. Probably because I heart blue. This haiku is so beautifully simple and uncomplicated. It's just... how it is. I like it. :)
Tender Sugar 2009-04-19 . chapter 1
And what a delicious fulfillment it was, wonderful.
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