Great poem. I love the idea and I think it somehow explains how I feel.. maybe how everybody might feel.

Great job and keep it up :)

an impressive poem. What does houseki mean?

sad and angst is really observable. You did it well again! :) You know right now, I just learned a new word and that is 'oblivion' haha lol! thank you for that! I need to remember it!

Like I said, this piece is sad and described very well. And the message is wistful!

Keep it up! :)