Really good so far (:
I really likes shift and I wanna know what happens next.
Post more soon please :D

really good so far. update soon

I liked that a lot! I really did! It was well written. There was a line 'I pulled my messy hair back up into a neat ponytail' I woudn't say 'neat' ponytail. Messy hair is hard to put in a neat ponytail, just say ponytail. Other then that, great job! I hope for an update soon!

PS. Add in that this is also the second one for Shift, since it would be better if they read Shift first because it's edited.

Also, for the trailer, I thought Claire had curly hair? (I kind of forgot to mention that)

Great beginning!!

There were a few missed commas, of similar nature to the ones I caught in Shift. There was a spelling error, you wrote 'expect' rather than 'except'.

Great job; update soon!