|Reviews for Crinoline Stains|
| Isca 4/19/09 . chapter 1
"Unborn infants fall, bubbles bursting." Oh my God! What a powerful, frightening, and brilliant opening! :)
"And they're dead." So sad!
"And I forget to act hostile." Intriguing. Fascinating. Thought-provoking.
"Still those infants scream, amniotic amnesty." Excellent alliteration & haunting infant imagery!
"I pick one up, cradle waxy limbs in sorrow." Oh! My heart hurts! Phenomenal line!
I really enjoyed reading this-it was quite refreshing,