"Unborn infants fall, bubbles bursting." Oh my God! What a powerful, frightening, and brilliant opening! :)

"And they're dead." So sad!

"And I forget to act hostile." Intriguing. Fascinating. Thought-provoking.

"Still those infants scream, amniotic amnesty." Excellent alliteration & haunting infant imagery!

"I pick one up, cradle waxy limbs in sorrow." Oh! My heart hurts! Phenomenal line!

I really enjoyed reading this-it was quite refreshing,

-Isca