Oh my gosh! That was amazing! I loved the way you wrote it, first of all. The personification was absolutely amazing. I love it when people do such great wor with personification.
I can definetly feel your love of music through this piece.
Over all, very well written. Absolutely amazing. :3

Wow.. just beautiful. At first I didn't get that the main was the piano but it quickly made sense and seemed very appropriate. Wonderful transition of time and beautifully graphic analogies and descriptions. It spoke much more than it's length in words.

Cheers,
IssacBlast

This was such a nice story, I could definitely feel your passion for music (how lucky you are to be gifted with music as well as writing) within the story.

It actually took me a while to figure out 'what' exactly was speaking, but once I had, it made it that much more enjoyable. I always get a tickle when people write from the perspective of inanimate objects.

I don't really have any criticism, except that maybe your sub-category (Humor) isn't exactly the best choice for this piece, but that decision is mainly your choice.

Thank you for sharing this with us!!

-Salamander