 Elephant-Artist 2009-04-25 . chapter 1It is very descriptive. There is nothing else to describe it. It is very short but great. talented writers can write short poems like you and get across the same thing. |
 xxoh-the-possibilitiesxx 2009-04-20 . chapter 1i liked this, especially the way you started and ended with the same thing. it flowed beautifully. keep writing! |
 thatkid 2009-04-20 . chapter 1most of the time i start to feel that way |
 Morgan Duriya 2009-04-20 . chapter 1A beautiful poem. and I love the rhythm. its been a while since your last poem, and I'm happy to be able to read another one of yours :) |