I personally love poems like this. They lead you on to think that it's something that will be romantic or whimsical and it turns into something beautifully sorrowful and heart wrenching. The more I read your works, the more in love with them I fall.

I am a manga writer of Angst/Romance and dark stories so I definitely appreciate stuff as beautiful as this. You are one of my favorite poets now and I'll make it my goal to read all of your poems.