Oh, that is so pretty...I'm going to cry now...

Your detail is rather strong throughout. I have to say (in all honesty and niceness) that I did not care for the repitition of "tell me..." perhapse rewording those lines toward the end would ease the read.

Just a suggestion, other then that I liked it.

Much love,

Juliet.

Words in another language always add such a lovely quality to a poem-"Itoshii Hito" only made "My Beloved" more powerful.

"What is it like to lie with the stars?" My word, what a stunning line. Only 'Great Ones' deserve to be around the stars. Itoshii Hito must be a Great One. :)

"What is it like to dance on the waves?" Beautiful imagery!

"Lulling and rocking white horses to sleep." This is my favourite part of the poem-this line is beyond incredible, it's phenomenal, and touched my heart. :D