This is very interesting! Have you guys read Memoirs of a Geisha? The book gives alot of information regarding the jap culture. :D

Anyway, the writing is really good and I can't wait to read more.

nice (:

fuck, this was a fantastic chapter.
i'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
great writing.

This is quite graphic but I can see it all building up to something that's going to explode at the end.

10 paper cranes hm? Does Wakana want to make a wish?

If it's fuedal, I'm guessing they wouldn't say the word fuck, it wouldn't be a huge suprise of a Geisha being a virgin btw, also how does Wakana have purple hair? Asides from this, it's really good.

Wow. wow, wow, wow.
This is amazing. And now i'm wondering where Mai really is.
Update soon!!

I thought it was beautifully written and even though my knowledge on Japanese culture is limited, it was pretty believable. :)

This really good, I can't believe it hasn't had reviews yet! It's amazing, I really want this to be updated :)
Happy writing!