|Reviews for estival abhorrence|
| Faithless Juliet 4/21/09 . chapter 1
The last two verses perfection! You have a lot of talent here.
Some advice, although all the verses were strong, it seemed like there were too many. Like it weighed, the actual point of the peice down. Especially toward the center of the poem. Just a suggestion, feel free to ignore me. Keep up the good work.