Yes, it is short but this is so good. It's like a stanza from a classic poem.

These words convey so much feeling. Well done, yet again!

The essence of this felt very fantastical to me, like this was slice out of a fantasy novel, or something to that effect.

The rhyming scheme was very nice as well.

Much love,
Juliet.

"Trapped within a corner of my soul." Heck, I think I 'felt a tear roll down my cheek' when I read this line--it's so heart-breaking and beautiful! :)

I can definitely feel the personal emotional dimension of this. Definitely as you said in your A/N, it is short, but I think that gives you some room to expand upon your thoughts. I think you have a great topic.

sweet.

Short, but meaningful. A lot of raw emotion here, and that makes it memorable.
Alex x