Reviews for immortality
shekherezada 4/24/09 . chapter 2
this is beautiful.

perfect.
all you need is oxygen 4/22/09 . chapter 2
i've fucking missed your writing.

your poetry is, as always, way above the standard.

the last trochee is beastly.
silly silly girl 4/22/09 . chapter 2
Stop being such a good writer.

Just kidding.

I thought you died, but you're obviously alive, kicking, and screaming.

This is very good.
kloun mannequin 4/22/09 . chapter 2
well, very powerful.