|Reviews for Blades, Bullets, and Benevolence|
| Freelance7 1/6/10 . chapter 1
Perfect, I love the details, keep it up, by the way, I am new here.
| HanddrawnThesaurus 8/28/09 . chapter 14
Awesome. Amazing. Perfect. Awesome. :P
It's your number one fan. Not so anonymous anymore, used to be 'Nooneoutof theblue' now, i am me. :P Loved it so much. Keep writing. I will be here the whole way through.
Haircut time? Keep it short. Almost like a shaggy army cut, perhaps? Or, ear-length.
Just shouting out. Have fun, continue on.
| HanddrawnThesaurus 8/4/09 . chapter 13
How many times should I say more?
How about once.
I love your writing. :) Continue on!
| HanddrawnThesaurus 7/22/09 . chapter 12
Awesome twelfe (?) chapter. So, Peter died? Shit. That's really too bad.
So where are the Treo going now? Hmm.
Okay, so can't wait 'till the Thirteenth chapter! Whoo!
| HanddrawnThesaurus 7/17/09 . chapter 11
My god. You're amazing. And even if no one ever comments much, I'm quite savvy on it.
I will comment every chapter, because i know that there will be more to come.
You are amazing as a writer.
- Your number one fan,
| HanddrawnThesaurus 7/13/09 . chapter 10
You seem to amaze me with every chapter. I am now done chapter ten, and hopeing that you will post more soon enough.
Well done. I love it. :)
Alright. Fingers crossed for chapter eleven!
(Melanie... you've portraiyed that something is fishy about her. Way to go.)
| HanddrawnThesaurus 7/12/09 . chapter 1
Amazing writing skills. And, i must point this out, i LOVE the Title of the book. It's very, parsay, Diffrent?
I love the book so far! Even if i AM only on chapter Seven. So, i hope you can write more.
Very nice work, you're looking at all the Possibilities, and it seems like your not just 'writing' your writing with your heart and soul. Or, maybe you're just this damn good?
Ooh. That'd be ah-mazing. :)
Alright. Keep going. I love it.
I'm defs a fan. :)
Good Job. :)
| NOWILDPARTIES 7/3/09 . chapter 1
Okay, I like your style, great idea and everything. Just one thing. It's a little bit short...
| Lucas McDrake 5/28/09 . chapter 5
That was awesome! _ Got me hooked.
There were some grammatical errors, but other than that, great job! I'm looking forward to your next update!
I think that you need to elaborate in some parts. Like, what does Gael look like? Is the time period medieval? How old is the baby? What is Gael's physique?
Just some suggestions. _ I hope you go along with them!
Your fellow writer,
Lucas McDrake _
| Lucas McDrake 5/28/09 . chapter 2
I got sort of confused. He already has feelings for the slave?
| Lucas McDrake 5/23/09 . chapter 1
Interesting. I like it so far.