Hello!

Tell me please that you are planning on writing a sequel. At least let us know if Jane got her scholarship! Please!

You did a nice job with this story, by the way.

This is odd but strangely enough I enjoyed it. It was well described and written. I think that you did a wonderful job and in explaning things it was undone but in a good way. You didn't need to explain everything, things just fell in place. Well I hope you continue on...:)

I really, genuinely enjoyed this. It was mysterious, and interesting, and funny in places... and it contained just enough backstory to leave me intrigued but not confused.

And it was well-written, which helped. =)

Is it just me or did this used to be in first person? Possibly I'm crazy. Anywho I love this story!

But it still seems like she makes a pretty big mental leap?