I like this.

I mean, that sounds lame, doesn't it?

But I really do love stories written in the stream-of-consciousness technique. And I DO love stories with interesting characters who seem...different from the others.

And I love the last lines:

"Maybe someone needs to know... She starts to write it all out."

Something you poured your soul into? Call me intrigued!

OMG. Imou-chan is such a good writer! (especially considering your age group and looking at others from your age group and how many mistakes they have. it makes me smile thinking how good you'll be when you're my age--though I'll be older by then but you get what I mean! considering I know i've mentioned this before, it never ceases to amaze me)

I only have one thing to say, the first paragraph kind of had a lot of commas. Though I'm no expert on them so . . . yeah. Just lots.

But that didn't deter me from it, in fact, you had me hooked from the first paragraph. -blush- you captured emotion very well and er, portrayed it well--if that sounds weird blame it on the time, it's like 2:30AM right now. I'm practically slurring like a drunk.

The whole 'can I ever be myself' thing I think that's a common issue upon younger people who are both trying to 'find themselves' yet 'fit in' at the same time. Ah to be young and confused.

Notice, she’s hurting.

I don't know why but I love that line so much. :O

Are you playing or not, -? (why's that there? ^.^;;)

Oh a germaphobe--sp? I read a one-shot from a manga about one. It was interesting. I just want to squeeze these people and kiss them on their forehead and give them some hand lotion. lol.

Or maybe hand sanatizer would be better. .^_^.

This was beautiful in a sad way. Touched me, really. You did a very good job imou-chan.

SMOOCHES
MUCH LOVE

PS: imou-chan...what's femslash?